Lesson 07.3 · Phase 07 Working with agents

Reviewing agent work.

01 · The problem

The agent will say the work is finished. That is a claim. You still have to check the brief, the facts, and the line it was not allowed to cross.

02 · The prompt

Ask for a review table: brief item, evidence in the draft, pass or fail. You will still read the draft yourself.

A review table

Review this draft against the brief. Table: item, evidence, pass/fail.
Brief: adults; Saturday; ten o’clock; tea; no hype; one page.
Draft: “KIDS DRAWING JAM!!! Saturday maybe around noon, energy drinks on us, rooms are definitely booked.”
03 · Try it

The draft is written to fail. The table should say so without politeness.

PromptYour prompt
Edit, then run
Illustrative answer — written for this lesson, not a live model

Adults — draft says kids — fail. Saturday — present — pass. Ten o’clock — “maybe around noon” — fail. Tea — energy drinks — fail. No hype — jam, marks — fail. One page — cannot tell — fail.

04 · What you made

A review that is independent of “done.” You still decide. The table just slows the shrug.