Lesson 04.3 · Phase 04 Conversation craft
Course-correcting.
01 · The problem
When the answer is wrong, people either accept it or start a new chat. Both waste the parts that were right.
02 · The prompt
Name the miss in one line. Restate the limit. Ask for a revision of the same piece, not a new invention.
A pointed revision
The last draft blamed Mara. That breaks the brief. Revise the same four sentences. Keep the Friday deadline and the class of 18. No blame, no apology from us.
03 · Try itPromptYour prompt
If you do not have a blamed draft, invent a bad line and correct it.
Illustrative answer — written for this lesson, not a live model
Hi Mara — Tuesday’s pallet has not arrived, and we still need it by Friday for a class of 18. What date can you confirm? Friday morning still works on our side. Thank you.
04 · What you made
A correction that keeps the thread. Point at the miss. Keep the rest.